#netball
43-17 our second game of the season, our first game wasn't amazing we lost by two but out second game was the best, even though we have played two games we have pretty good players, but I reckon I'm the worst in my team that's ok. We have some really amazing players and players that have never played before, but to be honest they are actually quite good. Our team just needs to work on a few things and we may be able to take it out. We had really good shooting by Lauren, Jennifer and Stevie. Our defence was good getting some amazing intercepts and getting the ball back to our hoop for a goal. Even though we had a few mistakes we won ! (:
YAY i am finished bro :L
xx olivia
Can you please go back and fix this up - you need to fix the punctuation and start it off differently so your readers know what you are talking about.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job editing your first piece :)